[Celestial Recruit] Looking For Feedback on a New Game

Hello friends!
It has been a little while since I have hung out on the forums. Hope everyone is doing well :slight_smile:

I recently created my first-ever proper game (well, an alpha version) for the Goes Over Well game jam in November. Very excited to actually have something real on itch! I’m going to be arranging some playtests in January onwards, but I was also looking for general feedback, comments, questions, and suggestions from people reading over the text (or playing it on their own without me!).

I plan on fleshing this game out going forward!

If you are interested in taking a look you can download it for free at: https://flockofwingeddoors.itch.io/celestial-recruit-the-war-for-the-fourth-link

Please feel free to reach out! Happy to explain, clarify, and take constructive criticism. I’m sure I have lots to learn about making RPGs and making them well :slight_smile:

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Hi, My main feedback is that the mechanics could be written more sparingly, and emphasised graphically to help learning.
The scale

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