Feedback for The Elementalist, a Dungeon World class

[STEPHINFECTION]

Hey there! I’ve been working on a custom class for Dungeon World, and I’ve got it to a point where I’m quite happy with it, at least in theory. Here’s the short blurb I wrote for it:

You used to be like the rest of the commoners, going about your majorly inconsequential life every day until one day you would die. But that is no longer the case. One day, someway, somehow, your potential became known and too great to be ignored. Whether in a destructive display of the forces at work within, or a quieter slip away from those you might hurt, you had to leave that life behind. Perhaps you were born for greatness, with destiny etched in lights above your little head. Or maybe it’s a curse from a warlock, generations past and thought broken. No matter the reason, the result is the same: you live with a raging battle of the forces of nature taking place in your very soul. Will you tame the elements within, and bend them to your will? Or will you let the battle engulf you, with the elements themselves spraying forth from your very being? Well, I suppose you’ll find out soon enough.

I’m but one person, so my own playtesting is going to be slow and not the best in terms of varied information. I’d really appreciate it if you would take some time out of your days and look over the playbook, and leave your thoughts and suggestions in the replies, over DM, or through the simple form I made. Thank you again for your time!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/10w8zX2HOlAfUIgOTg64X-5eg6DG8uxzC/view?usp=sharing

The Elementalist Feedback

[STEPHINFECTION]

Hello! I’ve updated the class, and felt it pertinent to update this post as well.
The changes made are as follows;

• Changed the Wind option for the Elemental Soul move to Water, updated passive ability, and look to reflect the change.
• Changed the passive look text of the Storm option for the Elemental Soul move.

You should see these changes reflected in the document linked above, if not please let me know!